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Kiss by ~crowhesghost:iconcrowhesghost:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Mature Romance > Fixed


You don't need to put your hair up
To show you wear a crown
You don't need to paint your face up
To make my walls fall down
You don't need a Wonderbra
To let your sexy shine
You don't need gold or diamonds
To tell the world you're fine
You don't need designer clothes
To prove that you have class
You don't need to know Houdini
To make the magic last

All you need is your sweet love
To be the woman I dream of.
©2007-2010 ~crowhesghost
:iconcrowhesghost:

Author's Comments

Weirdest thing. While I was writing this, I was hearing "Kiss" by Prince in my head, so it kinda went along to the tune. Go figure...

Anyways, this is for :iconrawem0tion:'s theme of the week, "Inner Beauty." Hope you all dig it. :D

Comments


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:iconaltergromit:
=altergromit Sep 26, 2007, 11:56:13 PM
...It seems to be a dedication to a silly girl... :giggle: ...We don't know if she gives her sweet love to you or if she is just concern about her need... ...How is supposed we read it *between the lines*?...
:hug:

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A dog is a man's best friend: where would Wallace be without Gromit? ;)
:iconjuanx:
~JuanX Sep 27, 2007, 1:07:29 PM
Awwww I really like it, it's very nice! great job! :clap:

I don't really look at deviations that are writing, but this is very good!

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"The secret to creativity is knowing how to hide your sources."

-Albert Einstein

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Amnesty International
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:icondrowningbywords:
*DrowningByWords Sep 27, 2007, 6:07:13 PM
aww this is very sweet :heart:
mommy is a lucky lady =D

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Music Is True Love:love:You have never been in love/Until you've seen the stars/Reflect in the reservoirs:love:Book Lovers Of The World Unite!
:iconcrowhesghost:
~crowhesghost Sep 27, 2007, 8:48:29 PM
She'd probably disagree with you there. :XD:

Thanks, for the comment and the fave. :hug:

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Well, make no mistakes, or switch off my channel/Armani rips when I fly off the handle.

I got two turntables and a microphone.

I am the High-Wizard-of-Things-That-Go-Bump-in-the-Night
:iconcrowhesghost:
~crowhesghost Sep 27, 2007, 10:24:08 PM
:D Thank you! Right now, I'm just trying to get myself back into the swing of writing again, so I expect my next few poems won't be quite up to snuff. But, I try. ;)

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Well, make no mistakes, or switch off my channel/Armani rips when I fly off the handle.

I got two turntables and a microphone.

I am the High-Wizard-of-Things-That-Go-Bump-in-the-Night
:iconcrowhesghost:
~crowhesghost Sep 27, 2007, 11:12:30 PM
:XD: No, it's just about how women always get themselves all made up and dressed up and present this certain image of themselves, instead of just relying on the fact that they're beautiful inside, and all the rest is just superficial.

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Well, make no mistakes, or switch off my channel/Armani rips when I fly off the handle.

I got two turntables and a microphone.

I am the High-Wizard-of-Things-That-Go-Bump-in-the-Night
:iconaltergromit:
=altergromit Sep 27, 2007, 11:46:13 PM
...mmmm.... ....You should have to say *most of them*: some woman just try to be not too bad just like a man does (hopefully!! :laughing:)

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A dog is a man's best friend: where would Wallace be without Gromit? ;)
:iconjuanx:
~JuanX Sep 28, 2007, 7:35:24 AM
Haha alright cool! ^___^

--
"The secret to creativity is knowing how to hide your sources."

-Albert Einstein

STOP THE HOLOCAUST IN DARFUR!
Amnesty International
Dollars for Darfur</a
:iconcrowhesghost:
~crowhesghost Sep 28, 2007, 9:00:15 AM
:D :nod:

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Well, make no mistakes, or switch off my channel/Armani rips when I fly off the handle.

I got two turntables and a microphone.

I am the High-Wizard-of-Things-That-Go-Bump-in-the-Night
:iconcrowhesghost:
~crowhesghost Sep 28, 2007, 9:31:42 AM
All right then, MOST of them. :D

--
Well, make no mistakes, or switch off my channel/Armani rips when I fly off the handle.

I got two turntables and a microphone.

I am the High-Wizard-of-Things-That-Go-Bump-in-the-Night
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