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Casey by *crowhesghost:iconcrowhesghost:

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You were pretty
Until you opened your mouth,
The brain turned off
As the words poured out
And you didn't listen-

Recounting the past, and
How tired you were of
Mister Right Now, and
All the disappointment that entailed
But you didn't listen-

You threw yourself at everyone
You threw it all away
On your knees
You aimed to please
Yourself.
Now you're trapped
In the hole you dug
Between your legs, and
Mister Right Now
Is gone again-

Maybe you should've listened.
©2007-2009 *crowhesghost
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Y'know. Everyone has that one friend at work who's a single mom, and she complains endlessly about her life's all messed up because of blah blah blah, so you give her some good advice, and you think she listened, then she gets herself knocked up by a horny Honduran busboy. It's the oldest story in the book.
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=altergromit:iconaltergromit: Apr 5, 2007, 12:12:42 PM
...I do my best, you write a lot and I cannot comment... ...I read your works but it is so hard to tell you what I understand, what I *see*... ...So I think you deserve to know I read your works, in spite of my English... ....This one... ...I think it is about peoplle who have *egocentric attitude*... :blahblah: :faint:
...As long as I can understand, the way it *sounds*, I like it... :hug:

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=LovittGirl:iconLovittGirl: Apr 6, 2007, 7:49:04 PM
:laughing: Oh, I'm sorry to be laughing, but that line "horny Honduran busboy" just killed me! But, it sounds like some of the divorced women I know. They complain about their ex's and about how they are tired of men just trying to pick them up for a quick lay while at the same time they bat their eyes at the prowling young bucks looking for a MILF.

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*crowhesghost:iconcrowhesghost: Apr 7, 2007, 4:39:17 PM
Sad thing is, it's literally the truth. She used to bitch about how screwed up her life is, then threw herself on anything with a penis, and finally got herself pregnant by a Honduran busboy.

Sterilization should be mandatory in certain cases... :no:

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I'm drowning here! And you're describing the water!
=LovittGirl:iconLovittGirl: Apr 7, 2007, 7:08:39 PM
Wow. Anything with a penis... *shudders*

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*crowhesghost:iconcrowhesghost: Apr 8, 2007, 3:06:15 PM
Well, she may've drawn the line at quadrupeds.

I hope. :puke:

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"We graduated with the highest temperatures in our class!"
"Hmph! Some class..."
"Oh, you said it, kid, some class!"
*crowhesghost:iconcrowhesghost: Apr 8, 2007, 3:44:30 PM
:XD: Anna, sweetie, it's okay! I know you read 'em, it's all good.

Casey is one of my co-workers who can't figure out what she wants from life, so she sleeps around a bit.

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"We graduated with the highest temperatures in our class!"
"Hmph! Some class..."
"Oh, you said it, kid, some class!"
=altergromit:iconaltergromit: Apr 8, 2007, 3:51:32 PM
ok! ...sometimes I wonder the same! :giggle: :hug:

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A dog is a man's best friend: where would Wallace be without Gromit? ;)
*crowhesghost:iconcrowhesghost: Apr 8, 2007, 4:39:10 PM
:glomp: :D

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"We graduated with the highest temperatures in our class!"
"Hmph! Some class..."
"Oh, you said it, kid, some class!"
=LovittGirl:iconLovittGirl: Apr 8, 2007, 6:33:49 PM
ewwwwwwwwwww

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